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托福作文满分范文：town or city?

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　　Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

　　I grew up in a small town and then moved to a big city, so I have experienced the good and bad sides of both. I never thought that I would like living in a big city, but I was wrong. After ten years of living in one, I can't imagine ever living in a small town again.

　　Small towns and big cities both have some problems in terms of transportation. In a small town, you have to own a car to ensure a comfortable living. You can't get around without one because there isn't any kind of public transportation. Big cities generally have heavy traffic and expensive parking, but there you have a choice of taking public transportation. It's not free, but it's often cheaper than driving when you consider gas and time. Especially if you don't have a car, you're better off in the city.

　　I love the excitement of big cities. Small towns have a slow pace. Large cities mean you have to adapt to a variety of situations, like finding a new route to work or trying a new restaurant. I enjoy that challenge very much. Another pan of the excitement of city living is the variety of cultural activities available. There is a wide assortment of theatre, music and dance performances available in big cities. These t...

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托福作文满分技巧

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　　新托福考试通过互联网与ETS总部组成局域网，为每个人发出不同的考题。考题一次有效，不会再有题库。此外，网考通过电子方式记录答案后，将答案传输到人工评分网络，并予以客观、可靠的评分，确保考试的公平合理性。托福听力、托福词汇、托福作文、托福口语等的实时

　　如果说托福独立写作是闭卷考试，那么你花上3～5分钟的时间去审题，去构思，是很必要的。但是，实际情况是，托福独立写作是开卷考试，首先题库公开，它的题型和题材都不会超出题库的范围，你总会在题库中找到类似的题目，加之机经的强大力量，使得托福独立写作真的成了开卷考试。既然是开卷考试，大家就应该把审题的工作放到考试之前做，争取在1分钟之内完成，不要浪费时间，把时间用来打字，而不是思考上面。

　　那些思维风暴、切题思路之类的，应该是事先已经准备过，训练过的。如果考到了从来没接触过的题，只能说明没有准备到位，如果审题时间超过了2 分钟，那么准备也没有到位，这就是开卷考试的备考思维，托福满分作文不是临场发挥出来的，而是准备出来的。

　　方法：提炼自己的托福写作模板

　　假设你的文章字数是400字，那么你大概要写40～50个句子。把这40～50个句子，排成编号，从第1个到第40个，也就是从文章的第一句话到最后一句话，你都知道要写什么，并且知道怎么写，甚至每个句子你都掌握了2～3个漂亮的句式，这样你还担心自己拿不到高分吗?再假设，这40～50个句子，你有50%都已经是固定句式了，也就是成了自己的写作套路，那么你还愁文章写不完么?比如说，在文章最后一句话说：In a word， it is rather superficial to simply say that……+观点，给个真题例子：In a word， it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.用一句话说，简单地认为父母是最好的老师是相当肤浅的。大家想一想，任何事情simply say都可以说是相当肤浅的。因此这句话就是一句比较万能的结束语。

　　题库中一共有185个题目，如果说每个题目都准备一篇托福写作范文是相当不可取的，效率太低，完全没有必要，压缩题库的方法主要有2种：A.将题库分类。每个分类写1～2篇就可以解决这个类的题目。 B.文章之间的互相转化。有了这些方法托福满分作文就不再是难题啦!

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新托福ibt考生必备的作文满分模板

托福作文满分

　　新托福 (Internet Based TOEFL 简称iBT-TOEFL) 自去年2005年9月在北美开考以来，很多考生谈此色变。有的考生把新托福戏称为 “ 我变态”(iBT 亦是我变态的谐音)。不少同学纷纷转考其他类型的考试，一试不爽，又转回iBT, 这么几个回合下来时间就被浪费掉了。纵观新托福考试的4大块，中国考生要在短期内(2 - 4个月)迅速取得新托福高分(100分以上)，考生必须有相当的应考策略。笔者对考生的新托福成绩作了大量统计和分析后发现考生考分相对高的2个部分是听力和写作。考分相对低的是阅读和口语。今天，作者着重和大家聊聊如何在极短的时间内(3天的时间)迅速取得作文27分以上，并给出作者参加新托福考试取得满分的作文部分模块，供各位考生参考。

　　作文考试作为新托福的第4部分，共有2篇作文。

　　一.Integrated writing ( 结合写作)

　　第一篇作文叫做Integrated writing ( 结合写作)，给考生3分钟读一篇文章(大概200字左右)，然后听一段关于对此文章的评论，结束后让考生写出150-225字的作文(只能打字)，典型的问法是：Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on point made in the reading. 听力结束后，阅读部分会再次出现并保留在电脑屏幕的左半部分，考生便可以开始写作。此文的评分标准有2条: 1. 要点分 2. 语言分

　　要写好此篇作文关键有以下几点：

　　1. 考生必须从根本上掌握英语八股文的结构。阅读时，考生必须按照八股文结构，记下这些points和support points 的details.

　　2. 听力时，考生要记下说话者是如何反对这些Points的。注意的是说话者的反对顺序不一定按照阅读文章的演进顺序进行。

　　3. 如果points 没有漏掉，接下来的关键就是考生如何表达说话者和阅读内容的关系了。

　　以下是作者参加新托福考试时关于smart cars写作使用的模块，提供给大家参改。

　　The lecture is mainly discussing ______, ________ and ___________ by _________, challenging what are stated in the reading passage that _________, _________ and _______.

　　First of all, the speaker thinks that ___________. In contrast, the reading passage believes that _____________. So, the lectures totally disagree with the view made in the reading.

　　Second, the speaker discusses ___________, Contradicting what is stated in the reading that _____________...

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托福作文满分标准：将阅读和听力内容结合

托福作文满分

　　在托福综合写作满分评分标准中，第二条是解释在写作时，如何将阅读和听力内容结合的。我们先来看看评分标准是如何解释的：

　　Coherently and accurately presents the information in relation to the relevant information presented in the reading.

　　此条评分标准告诉我们在托福写作时，要准确流畅地联系材料。一般了解过综合写作的同学必定知道，综合写作部分的听力与阅读的关系很简单，就是对立。这样理解并没有错，但是想在综合写作部分得到高分，还是有必要将综合写作部分听力与阅读内容的关系细化，换句话说，要将“对立”这种模棱两可的关系具体化。

　　当然，阅读部分的三个观点与听力部分的三个观点是一一对应的，这点不可否认，但是是怎么对应起来的呢，我们可以根据TPO1---24套的题目总结归纳如下三种具体的对立关系：

　　　1) 直接反驳

　　直接反驳，即听力中的三个观点是对阅读中的三个观点是对应起来直接反驳的。比如在TPO8中，三个听力观点就是直接反驳阅读中的三个观点的。

　　R：Critics thus argue that if the Chevalier had really been very rich, he would not have needed to borrow money.

　　L：First, the loan from the merchant. Well, that doesn’t mean that Chevalier was poor.

　　阅读中说Chevalier不是那么有钱，如果非常有钱就不必要再跟别人借钱。但是随后的听力内容就直接反驳道，Chevalier其实还是很有钱的，实情是，他在瑞士有很多固定资产(real assets)，他为了开派对和赌博通常要把这些资产转化为现钱，而这个过程通常需要一段时间，在这段时间他可能手头比较紧，于是先向某个商人借钱，但这并不代表他就没钱。

　　　2) 解决措施

　　这种关系在TPO综合写作中也有出现，就是针对阅读部分所提出的问题，听力部分相对应的给出一定的解决措施，最明显的就是TPO6中关于在线百科全书(communal online encyclopedias)的网络安全问题。

　　R：the communal nature of these online encyclopedias gives unscrupulous users and vandals or hackers the opportunity to fabricate, delete, and corrupt information in the encyclopedia.

　　L：Online encyclopedias have recognized the importance of protecting their articles from malicious hackers. One strategy …., another strategy….

　　阅读中说在线百科全书中的内容容易被篡改，随后...

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怎样才能获得托福作文满分

　托福写作考察多方面的能力，包括考生的词汇积累；短时间思维能力；文章构架能力等，要想得到托福写作高分，就必须有所准备，下面就为您解答托福满分作文的准备工作有哪几方面。

　　1.压缩审题的时间：

　　如果说独立写作是闭卷考试，那么你花上3～5分钟的时间去审题，去构思，是很必要的。但是，实际情况是，独立写作是开卷考试，首先题库公开，它的题型和题材都不会超出题库的范围，你总会在题库中找到类似的题目，加之机经的强大力量，使得托福独立写作真的成了开卷考试。既然是开卷考试，大家就应该把审题的工作放到考试之前做，争取在1分钟之内完成，不要浪费时间，把时间用来打字，而不是思考上面。那些思维风暴、切题思路之类的，应该是事先已经准备过，训练过的。如果考到了你从来没接触过的题，只能说明你没有准备到位，如果你的审题时间超过了2分钟，那么你的准备也没有到位，这就是开卷考试的备考思维，满分不是临场发挥出来的，而是准备出来的。

　　2.“栽赃法”

　　如果不能保证文章的质量，可以从数量入手，记住我在课上讲过的托福写作黄金法则“the longer， the better”!新东方的学员中曾经有位写作30分的获得者，独立写作30分钟写了600字，拿了满分。当然他肯定有一些不足和错误，可是仍然不影响满分。可见如果不能把文章写得很漂亮，不能写出亮点，那就多写点吧，字数多也是亮点。只要大家按照我上课讲授过的方法来扩充论据，写出“长篇大论”是很容易的事。

　　3.提炼自己的模板

　　假设你的文章字数是 400字，那么你大概要写40～50个句子。把这40～50个句子，排成编号，从第1个到第40个，也就是从文章的第一句话到最后一句话，你都知道要写什么，并且知道怎么写，甚至每个句子你都掌握了2～3个漂亮的句式，这样你还担心自己拿不到高分吗?再假设，这40～50个句子，你有50%都已经是固定句式了，也就是成了自己的写作套路，那么你还愁文章写不完么?比如说，我总是喜欢在文章最后一句话说：In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that.........+观点，给个真题例子：In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.用一句话说，简单地认为父母是最好的老师是相当肤浅的。大家想一想，任何事情simply say都可以说是相当肤浅的。因此这句话就是一句比较万能的结束语。这句话怎么来的呢?这是官方题库里的第2篇，是我和大家在课上积累来的。只要大家一起努力，我们一定会成功提炼出自己的高分模版。

　　4.压缩题库

　　题库中一共有185个题目，如果说每个题目都准备一篇范文是相当不可取的，效率太低，完全没有必要，压缩题库的方法主要有2种：A.将题库分类。每个分类写1～2篇就可以解决这个类的题目。 B.文章之间的互相转化：

　　不妨通过这样的例子来说明问题：

　　TOPIC1：你最崇拜的人是谁?why

　　ANSWER：毛泽东。原因：A.B.C

　　TOPIC2：如果你能回到过去，你想见谁?why ?

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新托福作文满分范文：Modern American Universities

　　新托福考试写作考生想拿高分，“肚子里必须有点墨水”，背上一篇两篇优秀范文，以备不时只需。以下这篇范文的题目是：Modern American Universities。
　　Before the 1850’s, the United States had a number of small colleges, most of them dating from colonial days. They were small, church connected institutions whose primary concern was to shape the moral character of their students.
　　Throughout Europe, institutions of higher learning had developed, bearing the ancient name of university. In German university was concerned primarily with creating and spreading knowledge, not morals. Between mid-century and the end of the 1800’s, more than nine thousand young Americans, dissatisfied with their training at home, went to Germany for advanced study. Some of them return to become presidents of venerable colleges-----Harvard, Yale, Columbia---and transform them into modern universities. The new presidents broke all ties with the churches and brought in a new kind of faculty. Professors were hired for their knowledge of a subject, not because they were of the proper faith and had a strong arm for disciplining students. The new principle was that a university was to create knowledge as well as pass it on, and this called for a faculty composed of teacher-scholars. Drilling and learning by rote were replaced by the German method of lecturing, in which the professor’s own research was presented in class. Graduate training leading to the Ph.D., an ancient German degree signifying the highest level of advanced scholarly a...

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新托福作文满分范文：children’s numerical skills

　　新托福考试写作考生想拿高分，“肚子里必须有点墨水”，背上一篇两篇优秀范文，以备不时只需。以下这篇范文的题目是：children’s numerical skills。
　　People appear to born to compute. The numerical skills of children develop so early and so inexorably that it is easy to imagine an internal clock of mathematical maturity guiding their growth. Not long after learning to walk and talk, they can set the table with impress accuracy---one knife, one spoon, one fork, for each of the five chairs.
　　Soon they are capable of nothing that they have placed five knives, spoons and forks on the table and, a bit later, that this amounts to fifteen pieces of silverware. Having thus mastered addition, they move on to subtraction. It seems almost reasonable to expect that if a child were secluded on a desert island at birth and retrieved seven years later, he or she could enter a second enter a second-grade mathematics class without any serious problems of intellectual adjustment.
　　Of course, the truth is not so simple. This century, the work of cognitive psychologists has illuminated the subtle forms of daily learning on which intellectual progress depends. Children were observed as they slowly grasped-----or, as the case might be, bumped into----- concepts that adults take for quantity is unchanged as water pours from a short glass into a tall thin one. Psychologists have since demonstrated that young children, asked to count the pencils in a pile, readily report the number of blue or red pencils, but must be coaxed into ...

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新托福作文满分范文：恒温动物

　　这篇作文是针对TPO第四套的综合写作(关于恐龙是否是恒温动物)写的，虽然有一些小错误，但ETS评分为满分。
　　Sample Response
　　The professor actually contradicts the statements made in the passage. She is of the view that dinosaurs are not endotherms i.e. they were not able to keep their body temperature at a constant rate.
　　The professor contradicts the issue of dinosaurs being endothers based on the availability of fossils being available in thwe polar regions, she say that the polar regions in those days were not as cold as they are today i.e at least warm enough for dinosaurs to live. Durin harsh winters she says that there is a possibility of the dinosaurs actually migrating to warmer regions.
　　The issue of leg position and movement being used as a reason to clasify the dinosaurs as endotherms does not please the professor either. She says that dinosaurs had legs under their bodies to support their huge bodies i.e the legs under the body of the dinosaur were actually to support the huge weight of the dinosaur and not to provide it with a body structure like endotherms(which is actually suited for running).
　　The professor acknowledges the presence of haversian canals but also points out that that the fossils show the presence of growth rings. These rings occur due to the thickening of the bone. The thickening indicates that the dinosaurs were’nt actually growing continuously but were experiencing periods of rapid growth and periods of no growth in succesion. This pattern. s...

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新托福作文满分范文：诚实与友情(2)

　　Question：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
　　Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
　　Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
　　the traditional virtue of telling the truth in all situations is increasingly doubted by many in today’s world. Many believe that telling the truth is not always the best policy when dealing with people. Moreover, the line of a “truth” is becoming more and more vague. This essay will explore the importance of telling the truth in relationships between people.
　　We all understand that often the truth is offending and may not be a very nice thing to both hear or say. Lies or white lies often have their advantages. The manipulation of white lies is the most obvious the business world. How many times have we heard that some product is “the finest” or “the cheapest”? how many times have we heard that products have such and such “magical functions”? advertising is about persuasion, and many would agree that if a company is to tell the absolute truth about it’s products, no one would be interested in even having a look at the products.
　　The same logic applies to human relationships. If your friend had worn a newly purchased dress on her birthday and energetically asked you if it was a worthy buy, would you freely express your opinion that you had never seen a dress as the one she’s currently wearing?...

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新托福作文满分范文：诚实与友情(1)

　　Question：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
　　Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
　　Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
　　Score 5 Essay
　　Dishonesty kills reliability
　　There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship.
　　People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful etc! Everyone would more or less wish that the person s/he is dealing with, has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their importance, however can be very subjective and relative.
　　When someone asks him/herself the question “What do I consider to be the most important thing in my relationship?” the answer depends on a lot of factors such as how his/her earlier relationships were.
　　After stating that everyone’s opinion can be different about this, for me honesty, in other words, always telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship. Opposite of this is inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie, either s/he is hiding something or is afraid of telling me something.
　　In any relationship of mine, I would wish that first of all, the person I’m dealing with is honest. Even though s/he thinks that s/he did something wrong that I wouldn’t like, s/he’d better tell me the truth and not l...

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