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Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because moral behavior cannot be legislated.

现代社会的很多问题是法律和立法系统无法解决的，因为道德行为是无法用法律约束的。

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The proposition asserts that the laws and the legal system cannot resolve many problems problem of the modern society since moral behavior cannot be legislated. In my point of view, I fundamentally agree with the speaker, as discussed below.

First of all, I concede that the laws and the legal system are essential to the modern society and they can resolve many problems. Common sense tells us that everyone has his own position and behavior, depending on their beliefs, experiences, knowledge, professions and emotional concern.However, we cannot simply let everyone do everything that he or she wants, since this will lead to mess and may harm the stability of the society. Thus, the government has to announce the laws and build a just legal system to restrict the citizens. Only by doing this, can the society get to a balance and harmonious status? For instance, the industrial factories want to expel the polluted water into the river without making it clean. If there is not a law or a legal system to restrict the factories from expelling the polluted water...

131. "The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."

As is known to all, arts, such as painting, music, literature, etc. hold great value in the development of society. Arts of different contents and forms are established along with the progress of the world and can deeply reveal something of the society. While having reservation that observing a society merely through the arts is not enough and sometimes even misleading, I fundamentally agree with the speaker that arts reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society.

Generally speaking, people may consider arts as a temporary escape from the monotoneous routine work in the daily life. However, the aim of art is far more than merely to amuse the public. Above all, arts mirror people's recognition of the world and expectation to the society, since the theme of artistic products are extracted from the personal experience of the artists. One one hand, artistic products do provide us with a glance at people’s recognition of lives and the environment they live in. We need to look no further than Bandari’s music for supporting example. The peaceful and gentle style of this band reflects the calm they feel when they get close to the nature. Beethoven’s Symphonie No.5 is also a good case to the point. Having experienced the ups and downs in career as well as the ex...

1. 无可否认，现代社会充满了竞争。竞争是社会进步的动力：从政治角度，候选人之间的竞争使政治更加公开化，民主化，有利于选民(美国总统大选);从经济角度，商家，产家之间的竞争促进产品质量的提高，消费者受益，比如各种不同厂家手机的竞争，使得手机的价格越来越低;从体育角度，individual之间的竞争体现了人类超越自我的人性(Olympic spirit)

2. 培养youth的竞争意识能使他们具备适应社会的生存能力，为追求自己的理想而奋斗。竞争可以更好的发挥youth的潜力和能力，比如学校的奖学金的分配，培养了学生的竞争意识，使得他们更好的学习，去争取奖学金。在这个过程中他们也掌握了一定的知识。毕竟要成为leader，需要通过与其他candidate的竞争。只有懂得取竞争才能表现出自己的优点从而成为领导

3. 然而合作意识teamwork也很重要，只有和他人合作才能共同进步，懂得合作才能更加了解一个team成员的有点和不足，才能更好的成为一个有效的领导者。(Nobel prize winner are a group of scientists)篮球比赛的时候，在不断的合作中，这个队伍是才能赢得比赛的。

4. 结论：应该培养当代年轻人同时具有竞争和合作意识(mutually compensate)

213. "Too much emphasis has been placed on the need for students to challenge the assertions of others. In fact, the ability to compromise and work with others -- that is, the ability to achieve social harmony -- should be a major goal in every school."