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英语:初一英语优秀作文点评(二)[1]

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假如你的名字叫王磊,你有一位美国朋友杰克(Jack)今年暑假要到西安来参观,你写信告诉他,你住在西安市南大街65号,从火车站乘10路公共汽车到历史博物馆下车。到时你将在车站等他。此信写于2004年5月1日。

注意:
(1) 数不得少于50个。
(2) 求意思完整,语句连贯。


Xi'an, China
May 1st, 2004
Dear Jack:
I'm very glad to hear that you'll come to visit Xi'an this summer holiday. Now I would like to tell you how to get to my house. I live at 65 the South Street, Xi'an. When you arrive in Xi'an by train (or by plane), you can catch (take) the No. 10 bus and get off at the History Museum. I'll wait for you there.
Yours,
Wang Lei

完成这道书面表达题应从以下几个方面着手考虑:
首先,这道题属于书信文件,所以应注意书信的正确格式。其次从提示的内容来看,主要是说王磊的一位美国朋友杰克于暑假要来西安参观,王磊写信告诉他行走的路线及到时在车站等他等细节,应采用一般现在时和将来时态来叙述。最后,同学们应结合所给的主要内容,用所学过的词(组)及句型来完成此文。

参观 visit 今年暑假 this summer holiday 想要 would like to do

到达 get to/arrive at/reach 乘坐公共汽车 catch/take a bus 下车 get off 等等。

优秀作文评析(二)——应用文 2
假如你叫Han Meimei,你的笔友Mary现在上海三中学习。她邀请你去参加聚会。请你用英语给Mary写一封信。信的要点如下:
(1) 你很抱歉,不能去。
(2) 你母亲病了,医生叫她卧床几日。你要照料母亲。
(3) 谢谢寄来的漂亮的明信片(postcard),很喜欢,将放在书桌上。

注意:
(1) 信要通顺、连贯。
(2) 词数60字左右。信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
(3) 如写不下,可写在横线下空白处。
No.3 Middle School
Shanghai
April 20, 2004
Dear Mary,
Thank you very much for inviting (邀请) me to your party. _______________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________...

与初一优秀英语作文相关的英语考试

英语网:初一英语优秀作文点评(三)

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看图写话
根据所给图示,以“Wang Lei's Busy Day”为题,写一篇不少于50字的短文,内容必须符合图意,语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整。(正文第一句已给出)

Wang Lei's Busy Day

It was March 8th yesterday.
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________

It was March 8th yesterday. It was Women's Day. Wang Lei wanted to do something for his mother. He went shopping and bought much food. Then he cleaned the room. He did his best to do some cooking. When his mother came back after work, she was very happy. Wang Lei was very tired, but he felt pleased. (58个词)

先“看准题意”:题目是Wang Lei's Busy Day。写作要围绕王雷一天中所忙碌的事情的顺序展开。描述昨天的事应该用过去时。从题意理解中即可“规范格式”:本文用记叙文格式去写。再“按点组句”:
(1)3月8日为妇女节。→It was Women’s Day.
(2)王雷去商店购物。→Wang Lei went shopping and bought much food.
(3)王雷打扫卫生。→He cleaned the room.
(4)他烧饭。母亲回家很高兴。→He did the cooking. When his mother came back, she was very happy.
完成组句后,“连句成段”,可加上句子间的衔接句子。如在(1)与(2)之间可加上Wang Lei wanted to do something for his mother.
在最后可再谈王雷一天的感受:He was very tired, but he felt happy.把这些句子连成段后,最后“通篇润色”

优秀作文评析(三)——看图作文2


看图组句
根据所给图画和提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的四句话。每幅图只写一句话,所给提示词语必须都用上。(注意:只抄提示语不得分)

提示:
(1)It was Tree Planting Day yesterday.
(2)early, morning, I, go, in my old clothes.
(3)we, help, each...

与初一优秀英语作文相关的英语考试

英语资源网:初一英语优秀作文点评(一)[1]

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根据中文意思和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯,符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上;每组英文提示所写的句数不限。

彼得只有五岁,和他的祖母住在一起。一天他的祖母得了重感冒,彼得急得直哭,后来他……

(1) Peter, five
(2) live, grandma
(3) have, cold, worried, cry
(4) idea, find, parents' telephone number, call
(5) news, hurry, home, hospital


Peter is only five (years old). He lives with his grandma. One day his grandma had a cold. Peter was so worried that he began to cry. Then he had an idea. He found his parents' telephone number and gave them a call. When his parents heard the news, they hurried back home and took Peter's grandma to the hospital.


根据中英文提示可理清需要进行表达的大致情节是:彼得只有五岁,他和他的祖母住在一起,一天他的祖母得了重感冒,他急得直哭。后来有了一个主意,他找到了他父母的电话号码,他打电话给了他们,当他的父母得知这一消息后迅速地赶回家,把祖母送进医院。须注意前面介绍的是一般情况用一般现在时,后面叙述的是过去发生的事用一般过去时。动词的运用及动词的时态是在进行书面表达时尤其要注意的。

优秀作文评析(一)——记叙文 2
请根据下面所给李玲的个人小档案,以My good friend为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍李玲的基本情况。要求条理清楚,语句通顺,体现表中的全部内容,不得少于12句话。

中文名:李玲
英文名:Susan

性别:女
年龄:15

祖籍:青海
学校:第八中学

年级:三
班级:二

特长:数学、英语
爱好:唱歌、看电视、打排球

优点:友好,善良,乐于助人,学习努力



My Good Friend
I have a good friend. Her Chinese name is Li Ling, and Susan is her English name. She is from Qinghai. Li Ling is fifteen years old. She studies in No. 8 Middle School. She is in Class Two, Grade Three. Li Ling is good at maths and English. She likes singing and playing volleyball very much....

初一优秀作文

初一优秀作文 初一习作范文

  上了初中,写作的任务又加重了,作业练习、练习作业......下面是学习啦小编为大家整理的初一作文,欢迎大家一起来分享!

  初一作文篇1:那一刻,我的世界春暖花开

  一张洁白的试卷无情地坠地桌子上,那卷头鲜红耀眼的极差有分数和那些不忍有视的红叉叉,更是深深的刻痛我的心,令我极为失望。原本以为可以考一个好分数,东山再起,没想到却又是名落孙山,我的心情一下子跌到谷底,从心凉到了底。

  放学后,我拖着书包无精打采的走着,远远望去,路好像没有尽头,我在路边的一座长椅上坐下,回想那些伤心的情景,回想老师对我失望的眼神,回想同学们对我异样的眼光,回想我的竞争对手因为这次考试赢了我的喜悦和那带有轻蔑的余光……我不禁抱头痛哭,任泪水淹没。为什么?明明熬夜复习了一个晚上,第二天考试却收不到我想要的效果,难道努力的那一切都只是徒劳无功吗?第一次已经失败了,为什么第二次又失败了,难道我真的学不好它了吧?我无奈的摇摇头,背着书包朝家的方向走去。

  回到家,我径直走入了我的房间,重重的把门关上,拉上窗帘,一个人在黑暗中独自思考,良久,我听见了雨滴拍打玻璃的声音,哦!下雨了。我起身极不情愿的把门打开,突然看见了窗台上的那株蔷薇花,一朵朵娇嫩的带着淡淡紫色的蔷薇花,在翠绿的茎叶之中若隐若现,煞是吸引人。雨水顺着墙如泉涌般连绵不断地落下,似乎要摧垮它的身躯,它轻轻的摇曳着,好像有被击垮的危险,雨越来越大了,它也摇晃的越来越大了,好像随时都会被击倒似的,我有点担心,忽然,它的叶子不知怎的,快要弯下去了,但它并没有屈服,竟慢慢的折回来了,它抵挡了雨水的冲击,在阻力的作用下,雨水在花叶间四散溅出,原本威猛的将军变成了滑稽可笑的小丑遁入泥土,仓皇而逃。

  这一画面如同电闪雷鸣般划过我的心际,我被深深地震撼了,也被深深的折服了,阳光灿烂。原来,失败并没能那么可怕,放弃才是悲剧。蔷薇在我眼中是多么渺小,可是在面对那么强大猛烈的雨水时,它丝毫没有退缩。而我也应该像它那样,做一个百折不绕的勇士,阳光总在风雨后,一个人只有经过磨练才会变得更加完美,更加坚强!

  感谢这株蔷薇,在我陷入低谷时挽救了我,使我重拾信心,便我心中那片绝望的土地春暖花开,重现光明,阳光灿烂。我深呼吸了一口气,目光坚定的朝书房走去,继续奋斗……

  初一作文篇2:我最喜爱的老师

  我最喜爱的老师是我们班的班主任——戴老师。

  我们的戴老师身材不高不矮,头发短短的,浓黑的眉毛下有一双炯炯有神的大眼睛。老师的眼睛不仅有神,而且是一双“神眼”,如果我们上课的时候做小动作,或字写得潦草,老师的眼神就会立刻向我们“射”来,就像能看穿我们每一个人。戴老师有一张“国”字脸,上面还长满了络腮胡子,乍一看,真是严肃有余,让人望而生畏,但是通过长时间的接触,我发现戴老师对待同学还是非常和蔼可亲的。

  我为什么喜欢戴老师呢?每当我做错事时,老师就会一边严厉地批评我,一边给我讲道理,让我认识到自己的错误,并且能够防止以后再犯类似错误。

  记得开学初,戴老师在黑板上写了十几道题目,让我们抄下来并做好……过了一会儿,我发现有一道题目不会做,就想趁老师不注意的时候偷看,可当我想偷看的时候,老师回过头来,他那双眼睛好像就在盯着我……当我的眼睛和他的目光相遇时,我心里不由自主地感到一丝丝凉意,好象老师在用眼神告诉我:不会做的题目要自己动脑筋,不能耍小聪明,我立即意识到自己不能这样做,一定要自己...

高一英语作文:高一优秀英语作文 honesty

英语作文网 英语

What is honesty? Honesty means speaking the truth and being fair and upright in act.Considered a virtue,it is admired in every country and every culture.So,Is it necessary to be honest all the time .

However,there are people who try to get benefits by dishonest means.

For example,some students copy the exercises done by others or cheat in examinations in order to get good marks. The same thing may be said of a merchant who tries to get rich by deceving customers. Those people may succeed for a time,but sooner or later,they will be caught.

How can cheating on exams be prevented? The measures may vary from case to case.But I think,the students must first be well informes of the negative effect on the learning atmosphere of the university and the students'character. Then the students who were caught in the act of cheating can be criticizedpublicly, punished or even expelled from the university.

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高一英语作文:高一优秀英语作文 An Unforgettable Experience

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This summer holiday, I went to Dalian with my family. We got there by air. Dalian is a very beautiful and modern city. On the bus, we could see all kinds of buildings which were great.

In the morning, we got to the hotel where we lived. After breakfast, we began to our travel. First we took the bus to the Sea Park. There are so many different kinds of fishes that I couldn’t believe my eyes. We also saw the show of dolphins. Then we had lunch in a restaurant. The seafood which was very famous in China was delicious.

After lunch we went swimming. The sea was blue and beach was golden. We all enjoyed ourselves in the sea. Finally we went back the hotel where we lived. We had a happy day.

In this trip, we also went to some places which were interesting and famous in Dalian, went shopping and so on.

Several days later, we left Dalian. On our way home, we were very happy. This was the reason why we didn’t feel tired. In all, we had a good holiday.

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高一英语作文:高一优秀英语作文 an interesting story

英语作文网 英语

One day, Mary went to the airport to see her friend off. Her friend’s name is Jack.

There were so many people in the airport, it was hard to find Jack among the people.

Suddenly, Mary saw Jack and she felt very happy then she shout:” Hi, Jack. Hi, Jack .Here, Here!”

At the same time, Jack waved his arms: ”I’m here!!” . Within 3 minutes, so many policemen came to the front of Jack and caught him: ”Please come with me to the police office.”

The word “Hijack” in the English has different meaning, you can find in the dictionary.

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高一英语作文:高一优秀英语作文 an interesting thing

英语作文网 英语

Singing is an interesting thing. There's people who are great singers that don't have good sounding voices (think Dylan, or even Bruce) and people who have great voices but aren't technically good singers (think Mariah Carey--her phrasing is abysmal). Now, there are a few singers that have good voices *and* are good technical singers--and these are the people that there is general agreement on. You make a list of these people as "great singers" and you generally don't get much argument. Marvin Gaye, Elvis, Paul McCartney, David Ruffin of the Temptations, Kate Bush, (to get out of rock a bit) Sinatra. That's a few of them. Anyone that tries to tell you that Marvin Gaye couldn't sing doesn't know anything about singing.

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