初中英语作文训练

　　同学们如何写出好的中考英语作文?1.分析提示信息。 2.连词组句。 3.同意异词。 4.避免简单堆积词汇。 5.多运用过渡词，连句成文，使全篇结构紧凑。 6.确保语言精练。 7.复查纠错。

　　I think much about my future that it’s good. First of all, I must have a healthy body so that I can work or do anything. I strongly support that saying that the body is the root of the revolution. Besides, I think I will have a harmonious family with my wife and children. I am the support of my family. I must work hard for them, so a good job is necessary. I want to be an engineer that earns a lot. And I will support my parents and my wife’s. From this point, a good job is extremely important. However, I hope I still have some free time for leisure, like traveling or do something I like. In short, I want a peace but rich future with my families.

　　关于我的未来，我畅想过很多，它是美好的。首先，我必须要有一个健康的身体保证我能工作或做别的事情。我十分赞同“身体是革命的本钱”这一说法。此外，我也会和我的妻子和孩子组建一个和谐美满的家庭，我是家里的支柱。我要为他们努力工作，所以一份好的工作也是必不可少的。我想成为一名工程师，这挣得比较多。我也要赡养我和我妻子的父母，从这点来看，一份好的工作就显得十分重要了。但是，我仍然希望我闲暇空余的时间，去旅旅游或者做我想做的事。简单来说，我想要的未来就和家人一起过平淡富足的日子。

　　中考英语作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。

　　你的朋友Dennis想到你常去的健身房锻炼身体，写一封电子邮件给他，向他介绍健身房的基本情况。电子邮件的开头部分已经写出。其余部分应包括以下内容： 1.健身房内的基本设施。 2.健身房开放时间和联系电话。 DearDennis, You want to know about my gym. The gym is”In Shape”...

　　健身房内的基本设施，健身房开放时间和联系电话。

　　DearDennis, You want to know about my gym.The gym is“In Shape”... The surrounding there is pretty well, they have all kinds of exercises machines, such as walker, etc... and of course you could take a warm bath after your exercises. here is the schedule of it: Monday to Friday: 9 am to 5 pm Saturday: 8 am to 8 pm Sunday: Closed Their number is : 1-718-568-4540 Good Luck! Pisci Ni

　　给朋友写电子邮件介绍健身房的基本情况 内容：你的朋友丹尼斯想到你常去的健身房锻炼身体，写一封电子邮件给他，向他介绍健身房的基本情况。电子邮件的开头部分已经写出。其余部分应包括以下内容：1。健身房内的基本设施。2。健身房开放时间和联系电话。DearDennis，你想知道我的健身房。该体育馆是呈“”... 健身房内的基本设施，健身房开放时间和联系电话。DearDennis，你想知道我的gym.The健身房是“形”...周围有相当好，他们有各种各样的练习，如沃克机等..当然你可以采取你的练习后，热水澡。这里是它的时间表：星期一至星期五：上午9时至下午5时星期六：上午8时至晚上八时，星期日：关闭了他们的号码是：1-718-568-4540好运!

　　新的一学期又开始了，亲爱的同学们也将步入紧张而充实的初三最后一学期的生活。初三是一个神秘的名词，它又是三年学习中终期的一个代名词。人生的道路虽然很长，但关键的往往却只有几步，而初三就是这关键几步中的第一步。我们只有迈好这一步，才能顺利通往人生的顶点。同学们，初三是机遇，初三是挑战，初三这座大山就横在我们面前。为此，我们只能选择拼搏，不能后退!寒窗九载，只剩最后一搏，同学们，再加一把劲，每天进步一点点，那就是成功，只要不放弃追求，就永远不会被打败!

　　公益活动

　　Public Benefit Activities

　　Yesterday, our class had a public benefit activity. In fact, we went to nursing homes to recite English and Chinese texts and sing songs for them for the old ladies and men. A few days before, we read a text about the loneliness of the people in the nursing homes. So we are volunteering to hold this volunteer labor. We have prepared our own part at for a week. On Friday afternoon, we brought our performance there and showed them one by one. The old were laughed happily, so did we. It’s so good to have such activity.

　　昨天，我们班进行了一场公益活动。事实上，我们去了养老院给那儿的老爷爷老奶奶朗诵英文和中文文章、唱歌。前几天，我们看了一个关于老人们在养老院的孤独的文章。所以我们主动举行这次公益活动。我们准备自己的角色准备了一个星期。上周五下午，我们一样接一样地向他们展示我们的表演。老爷爷老奶奶们都开心地笑了，我们也很开心。像这样的活动真是太好了。

　　新的一学期又开始了，亲爱的同学们也将步入紧张而充实的初三最后一学期的生活。初三是一个神秘的名词，它又是三年学习中终期的一个代名词。人生的道路虽然很长，但关键的往往却只有几步，而初三就是这关键几步中的第一步。我们只有迈好这一步，才能顺利通往人生的顶点。同学们，初三是机遇，初三是挑战，初三这座大山就横在我们面前。为此，我们只能选择拼搏，不能后退!寒窗九载，只剩最后一搏，同学们，再加一把劲，每天进步一点点，那就是成功，只要不放弃追求，就永远不会被打败!

　　Usually, our teachers often give some evaluation on us according to the performance in their eyes. Although it is one of the Chinese traditional education system, it is unfair in some extend. So, teacher evaluation becomes an important part in the education system, especially in the course evaluation. To have high quality courses, both teachers and students should take the responsibility. So, if students can appraise the teaching quality for every teacher, it will be helpful for high quality classes. As no one will be perfect, teachers can realize their disadvantages on teaching from teacher evaluation. Thus, it is important and necessary.

　　通常，我们老师经常会根据在他们眼中我们的表现来做出一些评价。虽然这是中国教育体系中的一个传统，但是在一定程度上是不公平的。所以，教师评价已成为教育体系的重要组成部分，特别是在课程评价上。展开高质量的课程，教师和学生都有责任。所以，如果学生能够对每个教师的教学质量做出评价，这将有助于提高课程的质量。没有人是完美的，教师可以教师评价中了解到自己的缺点。所以说教师评价是重要和必要的。

　　新的一学期又开始了，亲爱的同学们也将步入紧张而充实的初三最后一学期的生活。初三是一个神秘的名词，它又是三年学习中终期的一个代名词。人生的道路虽然很长，但关键的往往却只有几步，而初三就是这关键几步中的第一步。我们只有迈好这一步，才能顺利通往人生的顶点。同学们，初三是机遇，初三是挑战，初三这座大山就横在我们面前。为此，我们只能选择拼搏，不能后退!寒窗九载，只剩最后一搏，同学们，再加一把劲，每天进步一点点，那就是成功，只要不放弃追求，就永远不会被打败!

　　(山东省卷)今年我省出台了系列推进素质教育的新政，其中对学生的作息时间做了严格规定。学生课外时间增多了，他们都在干些什么?他们的负担减轻了吗?下面是English Online杂志社就这些问题对某市部分初中生进行问卷调查的结果。请根据该调查结果写一份80～100词的调查报告，并简单谈谈你的意见和看法。文章的开头已给出，不计入词数。

　　How many students 60% 5% 15% 20% What do they do Study, read books or do homework Watch TV Play computer games Do sports or play outdoors

　　English Online made a survey on what junior middle school students do in their spare time. Here is the result._______________________________________________________________________________

　　参考范文：

　　English Online made a survey on what junior middle school students do in their spare time. Here is the result.

　　After school, 60% of them study and read books or do homework at home. 5% watch TV and 15% play computers games. 20% do sports or play outdoors with classmates or friends.

　　Things are much better than before, but still about 60% of students are busy at studying in their free time. Study is not the only important thing for children. Playing is important for them, too. By playing, children can keep healthy, and can learn things that they can‟t get from books. So children need more time to do different kinds of activities.

　　新的一学期又开始了，亲爱的同学们也将步入紧张而充实的初三最后一学期的生活。初三是一个神秘的名词，它又是三年学习中终期的一个代名词。人生的道路虽然很长，但关键的往往却只有几步，而初三就是这关键几步中的第一步。我们只有迈好这一步，才能顺利通往人生的顶点。同学们，初三是机遇，初三是挑战，初三这座大山就横在我们面前。为此，我们只能选择拼搏，不能后退!寒窗九载，只剩最后一搏，同学们，再加一把劲，每天进步一点点，那就是成功，只要不放弃追求，就永远不会被打败!

　　(福建泉州)初中的学习生涯即将结束了。三年来，在你获取知识的同时，你的外貌，兴趣爱好，习惯…都有了一定的改变吧!请你一定以(How I Change)为题，写一篇短文，告诉我们你的变化好吗?字数在80词左右。

　　温馨提示：1.短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。2.这些词汇也许对你有帮助:hobby, habit, used to, enjoy oneself3.短文开头已经为你写好(字数不计入总数)，请你接着往下写。

　　How I Change

　　My life has changed a lot in the past three years. ……

　　How I Change

　　My life has changed a lot in the past three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was a short and shy girl with long hair. I often listen to music at home. But now I like to make friends and take part in all kinds of activities. I prefer running with my classmates. So I‟m becoming much healthier than before. Not only my parents but also my teachers are satisfied with me.

　　新的一学期又开始了，亲爱的同学们也将步入紧张而充实的初三最后一学期的生活。初三是一个神秘的名词，它又是三年学习中终期的一个代名词。人生的道路虽然很长，但关键的往往却只有几步，而初三就是这关键几步中的第一步。我们只有迈好这一步，才能顺利通往人生的顶点。同学们，初三是机遇，初三是挑战，初三这座大山就横在我们面前。为此，我们只能选择拼搏，不能后退!寒窗九载，只剩最后一搏，同学们，再加一把劲，每天进步一点点，那就是成功，只要不放弃追求，就永远不会被打败。

　　【2013浙江温州】 61. 初中的生活即将结束，一项调查结果显示很多同学想在考试后去旅游，但是也有同学不喜欢旅游。请以“Traveling is ”为题写一篇约100词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。

　　要求：1)先把题目补充完整(可用interesting，boring等);2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

　　参考范文1：(104词，19分)

　　Traveling is interesting

　　Traveling is interesting.

　　You will have lots of fun things to do and see during the trip. Just imagine that you are walking in the beautiful mountains, enjoying the fresh air and listening to the birds singing. It’s amazing, isn’t it? Sometimes, you may meet people from different places and make friends with them, which makes your trip a more pleasant one. Also, you may have many interesting things to share with your friends when you are back. All the pleasure of your trip will be kept in your memory.

　　It’s not surprising that so many students can’t wait to go traveling after the examination!

　　参考范文2：(106词，19分)

　　Traveling is boring

　　Traveling is usually boring.

　　There are always too many people in places of interest in China and it is crowded everywhere, especially on holidays. Just imagine that you are waiting in line, hungry and thirsty. “Why do I come here? To see the crowd?” you may complain. If you are unlucky , you...

　　新的一学期又开始了，亲爱的同学们也将步入紧张而充实的初三最后一学期的生活。初三是一个神秘的名词，它又是三年学习中终期的一个代名词。人生的道路虽然很长，但关键的往往却只有几步，而初三就是这关键几步中的第一步。我们只有迈好这一步，才能顺利通往人生的顶点。同学们，初三是机遇，初三是挑战，初三这座大山就横在我们面前。为此，我们只能选择拼搏，不能后退!寒窗九载，只剩最后一搏，同学们，再加一把劲，每天进步一点点，那就是成功，只要不放弃追求，就永远不会被打败。

　　【2013广东湛江】作文(满分20分)

　　初三毕业在即，你班将组织一次课外活动。假如你是班长，请根据正面内容，用英文写一篇80词左右的活动计划。

　　内容要点:

　　1. 下星期天早上8点在校门口集合，下午2点返回;

　　2. 坐公交车前往寸金公园(Cunjin Park);

　　3. 唱歌、跳舞、野餐、与老师合影;

　　4. 带齐食物、饮料等;

　　5. 注意安全和防火。

　　要求：1. 包含所给出要点，可适当发挥;

　　2. 不里逐词翻译，词数约80字左右。(文章开头不计入词数)

　　3. 文中不能出现考生的直实姓名、校名和共他真实信息。

　　参考词汇：at the school gate(学校门O);activity(活动); keep away from fire (远离火灾)

　　Our class is going to have a picnic in Cunjin Part next Sunday.

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　　【答案】

　　Our class is going to have a picnic in Cunjin Part next Sunday. We are going to meet at the school gate at 8:00 on Sunday morning. And we will be back at 2:00p.m.. We plan to take a bus to Cunjin Park. We will have many activities there, for example, singing, dancing, having picnic and taking photos with our teachers. I’m sure we will have a lot of fun. I will ask my classmates to take plenty of food and drink. We should pay attention to the safety. And we must...