告别悲观作文

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　　桌上有半杯水--这是事实。

　　桌上只有半杯水--说得没错。

　　桌上还有半杯水--我看到了你的微笑。

　　由此可见，不易改变的是这个世界，可以改变的是你的心态。面对同一扇门，有人悲观于门内的黑暗，有人却乐观于门内宁静;有人悲观于门外的风雨，有人却乐观于门外的自由。悲观与乐观，不同的心态，我要说：告别悲观。

　　实验失败了，有人说：1000次的惨败，你该收手了吧!爱迪生却告别悲观：1000次的失败起码告诉我1000种材料不能制作灯丝。终于在他的坚持下，灯泡发明成功了!他若没有告别悲观，那人类不知还要在黑暗中摸索多少年。

　　细胞衰竭老死了，有些人悲观地躺在床上自怨自艾，等待别人的照料。霍金却告别悲观，独自坐上轮椅，用僵硬的手敲打鼠标，探索着那未知的世界。他若没有告别悲观，又何来一位用意志创造奇迹的伟人呢?

　　受到别人嘲笑与羞辱了，有人独自停留在角落默默哭泣，而李阳却顶着骄阳大声地喊"英语"。他告别悲观，用这种近乎疯狂的行为创造了"疯狂英语"。

　　小草被狂风压弯了腰，可它告别悲观，风雨后重新振作，面向朝阳;鱼儿被江流冲离了港湾，可它告别悲观，逆流而上，最终在故乡快乐的生活;云朵被风儿吹散，可它告别悲观，重新聚拢，为大地降下甘霖----

　　面对同一扇门，你会再懦弱地无从选择、犹豫不前吗?你会再悲观得恐惧、不安吗?告别悲观吧!也许你无法改变世界，但你可以摈弃悲观的心态，直面挑战与磨练。

　　桌上还有半杯水，我们微笑吧----

　　点评：本文的优点显而易见：

　　1、立意很好，体现了青少年特有的朝气：告别悲观，我们只要乐观。

　　2、本文的语言也很有特色：开头三段通过巧妙地改换句式，就传达了题目所蕴涵的深意，也奠定了全文的感情基调。文中作者大量运用了修辞手法：运用对比，突出了"告别悲观"的胜利结果;运用排比，使"告别悲观"的主题显得铿锵有力;运用拟人，减少了说教成分，使得"告别悲观"的观点易于被人接受。3、结尾不但照应了开头，又用"微笑"再次隐晦地点明题目，使得文章浑然一体。

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　　中考满分作文500字范文及点评：告别悲观

　　桌上有半杯水--这是事实。

　　桌上只有半杯水--说得没错。

　　桌上还有半杯水--我看到了你的微笑。

　　由此可见，不易改变的是这个世界，可以改变的是你的心态。面对同一扇门，有人悲观于门内的黑暗，有人却乐观于门内宁静;有人悲观于门外的风雨，有人却乐观于门外的自由。悲观与乐观，不同的心态，我要说：告别悲观。

　　实验失败了，有人说：1000次的惨败，你该收手了吧!爱迪生却告别悲观：1000次的失败起码告诉我1000种材料不能制作灯丝。终于在他的坚持下，灯泡发明成功了!他若没有告别悲观，那人类不知还要在黑暗中摸索多少年。

　　细胞衰竭老死了，有些人悲观地躺在床上自怨自艾，等待别人的照料。霍金却告别悲观，独自坐上轮椅，用僵硬的手敲打鼠标，探索着那未知的世界。他若没有告别悲观，又何来一位用意志创造奇迹的伟人呢?

　　受到别人嘲笑与羞辱了，有人独自停留在角落默默哭泣，而李阳却顶着骄阳大声地喊“英语”。他告别悲观，用这种近乎疯狂的行为创造了“疯狂英语”。

　　小草被狂风压弯了腰，可它告别悲观，风雨后重新振作，面向朝阳;鱼儿被江流冲离了港湾，可它告别悲观，逆流而上，最终在故乡快乐的生活;云朵被风儿吹散，可它告别悲观，重新聚拢，为大地降下甘霖……

　　面对同一扇门，你会再懦弱地无从选择、犹豫不前吗?你会再悲观得恐惧、不安吗?告别悲观吧!也许你无法改变世界，但你可以摈弃悲观的心态，直面挑战与磨练。

　　桌上还有半杯水，我们微笑吧……

　　点评：本文的优点显而易见：

　　1、立意很好，体现了青少年特有的朝气：告别悲观，我们只要乐观。

　　2、本文的语言也很有特色：开头三段通过巧妙地改换句式，就传达了题目所蕴涵的深意，也奠定了全文的感情基调。文中作者大量运用了修辞手法：运用对比，突出了“告别悲观”的胜利结果;运用排比，使“告别悲观”的主题显得铿锵有力;运用拟人，减少了说教成分，使得“告别悲观”的观点易于被人接受。

　　3、结尾不但照应了开头，又用“微笑”再次隐晦地点明题目，使得文章浑然一体。

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　　篇一：悲观的缺点英语作文

　　A bottle had fallen down，with half of its water pouring out. To the scene, two men responded differently, one man, feeling extremely sad, his hand covering his face, sighed ”All has gone!” The other seemed much more optimistic. He ran happily to raise up the bottle and said with great gratitude ”There is still some water left.”

　　Why did the two people have such distinct reaction? It is because they judged the situation from opposite perspectives. After the bottle fell, the pessimistic observer focused on the losses thereby thinking negatively, while liuxue86.com the other observer noticed the remaining liquid and then had a positive opinion. Actually, the fallen bottle is a symbol of unfortunate circumstances in life and the two kinds of responses reflect two different attitudes towards misfortunes.

　　Misfortunes mean obvious losses; however , they still bring latest opportunities to people with optimistic mind. From the perspective of optimists, firing a career disaster , will be a reminder of the necessity for an urgent improvement in their personality or expensive sensing the signal for change, those optimists will strive to achieve personal growth, the growth which provides a guarantee to healthier career development in the future. Misfortunes are blessings in disguise and optimism can unlock the cover. Therefore, in the face of misfortunes people should adopt an optimistic ...

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　　篇一：悲观的坏处英语作文

　　Dear Petty,

　　I am happy to receive your letter and I am glad to hear that you have good days recently. I hope you can keep your happiness all the time. But I am not happy these days, because I feel great pressures. Two weeks ago, I caught a cold and then had a fever. I could do nothing in liuxue86.com those days. Therefore, I asked for leave for four days to stay at home. I came back to school until the midterm examination. I was not surprised that I did not do well in the exam. It makes me unhappy. I worked so hard to prepare for it. My parents comfort me that I would be better if I had not been ill. I hope I can recover soon. And I hope you can take good care of yourself.

　　sincerely yours,

　　篇二：悲观的坏处英语作文

　　A bottle had fallen down，with half of its water pouring out. To the scene, two men responded differently, one man, feeling extremely sad, his hand covering his face, sighed ”All has gone!” The other seemed much more optimistic. He ran happily to raise up the bottle and said with great gratitude ”There is still some water left.” Why did the two people have such distinct reaction? It is because they judged the situation from opposite perspectives. After the bottle fell, the pessimistic observer focused on the losses thereby thinking negatively, while the other observer noticed the remaining liquid and then had a positive opinion. Actually, the fallen bot...

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