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【社会类】专业人士是否应该比文体明星更加高薪
Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers make greater contribution. So they should be paid more than those sport and entertainment persons. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人认为专业人士应该比文体明星高薪,是否认同?
【作家立场】 对比文体明星, 专业人士(医生,教育者,武警等)更有高薪的理由。
【头脑风暴】一个人的薪水应该和其能力及对于社会做出的贡献成正比,职业背景并非最关键的因素。无论文体明星还是专业人士,都有高薪的理由。然而,贫富差距加大,拜金主义盛行的重要的原因之一就是文体明星的惊人薪水。形成对比是,很多专业人士付出的辛苦更多,做出的社会贡献更大,薪水反而相对较低。因此,专业人士更有高薪的理由。
范文赏析
【首段】首段:背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场
It is not rare to see that some worldly famous entertainers and athletes usually have a sort of comfortable salary compared with other professionals. People have been debating,for many years,whether or not top stars such as movie stars and professional players, should deserve more financial rewards. Personally speaking,they have no reasons to enjoy extremely high income in comparison with other professionals.
【二段】 让步段:文体明星高薪的理由
Indeed, I have to concede that those famous entertainers and athletes have some reasons to have handsomely paid jobs. First, their arduous efforts can not only enrich people’s spiritual life but also help people relieve pressure triggered by modern life. Further, striving for stardom requires large amoun...