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The Harm of Fake Commodities
With the rapid economic development, fake commodities have rushes into our life and greatly affected the normal market order. As can be seen, fake commodities are greatly harmful to both the consumers and the manufacturers.
But why have fake commodities become so common? For one thing, some businessmen take risks producing and selling fake goods just for the purpose of making money, and some customers buy those products because of the lower prices. For another thing, the punishment for producing fake goods is not severe enough to stop the violators/ therefore, today’s market has been flooded with fake brands of food, clothing and medicine, etc.
Fake commodities have left thousands of people in confusion and panic: they no longer have a sense of safety. How terrible! I think it is high time we took some measures to clean up our society.
1.fake commodities 假货 2. take risk doing sth. 冒险做某事
3. violator n. 犯规者
点评： 作者的写作思路是先说现象，然后分析原因，最后指出，对于假货我们应该尽快采取措施去制止其蔓延。
起始段适用： Fake commodities inflict the society as well as the consumers great danger. 假货不仅给消费者也给社会带来了很大的危害。
中间段适用：Here and there, fake commodities are all around us and remind us how dangerous
they are.
假货遍布在我们周围，提醒着我们它们有多危险。
结尾段适用： Living in a world with so many fake c...
