对于很多准备考雅思的同学来说,不知道准备得怎么样呢?今天就和出国留学网的小编一起来了解一下雅思写作结尾模板分析。
他对于雅思大作文结尾段的理解:
Conclusions are actually quite simple. The purpose of the conclusion is to answer the question in the title. Do this by referring to the points you have already made in the main body. Don’t repeat whole sentences, just summarise the main points. It is also important that you do not raise any new ideas in the conclusion. The conclusion need not be long. Keep it brief and make sure it is directly related to the question.
雅思作文的结论部分事实上相当简单。结论部分的目的是回答作文话题中的提出问题。你可以通过提及你在主体部分所论述的观点来回答。不要完全的重复整个句子,归纳概括要点就行了。另外重要的一点是不要在结论部分提出新的观点。结论部分不许要冗长。要保证简要准确地并相关。
在这里呢,simon其实提醒了烤鸭们在结尾段往往容易出错的2点:1.大段重复前面主体段里的观点;2.提出新的观点。他认为,结论段,仅在于概括式地重申前文的观点。
雅思大作文结尾段范例1:2连问题型
话题:Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
对于这种“two-part”question,simon的处理方式是4段式,导入+主题段1(回答问题1)+主题段2(回答问题2)+结论。前面的内容,就略过了,直接看他的结论段的写法。
In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market.
稍稍拆解下这个句子,其实是讲了“观点”+“期待/目的”,观点是应该给予本土电影业更多的财政支持,目的是为了让它有能力同目前支配着电影市场的海外电影一较高下。中间用一个and连接,可以说自然而简明,丝毫没有非“从句”和“非谓语动词结构”等复杂语法不可的架势。要注意指出的是,他所提到的“给予更多的财政支持”和“海外电影居市场的主导地位”都是前文都已经提到的观点。机尾段重点在于“转述”(paraphr...