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新东方何钢：雅思大作文注意事项 雅思一直是中国考生比较头疼的部分，如何突破雅思写作高分?2012年雅思写作该注意些什么?新东方培训师何钢老师给考生们分享：雅思大作文注意事项。

一、雅思大作文开头：

开头要短小;要有立场和观点;避免模板。

如：Should the amount of advertising on TV be increased or decreased?

Nowadays many people discuss whether we need …or not.

Now whether…. has become a very hot debate in society.

As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. Some people think that ……Others believe that …... I think both views have their reasons.

Recently the ... has been brought into focus ... Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.

二、雅思大作文结构：

一个paragraph一个idea;避免过多examples, esp personal examples.;段落间的平衡

三、雅思大作文语言：

避免idioms, famous sayings

避免poetic language

Explain your point…then explain it again in a different way

Use “a mix of longer and short sentences”

新东方培训师何钢：北京新东方学校校长教学助理，英联邦考试项目主任。新东方享有盛誉的雅思写作教师。1999年开始从事雅思教学。致力于从文化、逻辑和语言的角度帮助学生把握雅思写作。

发信人: 孙肇春(Tony)

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of unisexual schools. (男女分校的利与弊)

Boy schools and girl schools shoot up very rapidly both in foreign countries and at home. In China, girl schools have enjoyed a very long history since one hundred years ago. Many sociologists and educationalists present their views on this issue from different angles. In this essay, I will zero in on the advantages and disadvantages of the controversial phenomenon. (60 words)
Some parents prefer to send their children to boy schools or girl schools in the hope that their children can concentrate on study and acquire adequate knowledge and skills because unisexual schools can make out appropriate curriculum and courses for students according to their sexual characteristics. In some girl schools, students have a wider choice of courses such as dancing, music, embroidery and drawing, which can cultivate their feminine elegance and charm. Furthermore, students can devote themselves fully to their study and will not be distracted. Campus love affairs are very common in the current society under the influence of media. Boy schools and girl schools can eradicate contact between different sexes and purify the campus environment. (117 words)
Of course, some experts point out that boy schools and girl schools are not beneficial to the adolescent development of students. They believe that ...

3道犯罪与法律类雅思写作话题

在雅思写作中，提到犯罪与法律类的写作话题，很多学生会觉得其中的一些内容是十分陌生的，而且在面对这类写作话题时，会时常感到无从下手，不知从何谈起，所以今天小编就为各位考生整理了一些与之相关的写作话题，考生们可以根据下面的内容进行一些整理和了解。

1．青少年犯罪

母题：In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes.Why is this case happening? How should children or teenagers be punished? (100804)

提示：青少年犯罪juvenile delinquency 产生的原因及其解决方法。可从家庭、社会、媒体三个角度分析。

子题：很多年轻人有一种反社会行为，原因是什么，如何解决?犯罪是人类本性，还是可以预防的?

2．犯罪预防

母题：Unlike in most other countries, police in the UK do not commonly carry guns.Some people think it leaves citizens unprotected.But others think it reduces the overall violence in our society.Discuss both sides of the view and give your opinion.(040320, 040619)

提示：这道题目当之无愧地成为母题，因为这道话题自从2010年9月起已经成为了雅思口语话题中的题目。11年8月20日，这道题目以变题的形式再一次出现在雅思写作中。

子题：是否应该严惩违反交规者?城市中采取预防犯罪的措施，利大于弊吗?个人如果为所欲为，社会就无法运转，你同意吗?犯罪是世界问题，无法预防，你同意吗?

3．罪犯惩处

母题：Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them.Education and job training are better ways to help them.Do you agree or disagree? (050618, 080918)

提示：其实囚禁imprisonment和再教育都是一种让囚犯改造rehabilitate的方法。还有community service对于轻犯和初犯都是一种不错的惩处方式。

子题：监狱除了惩罚犯罪，还有什么功能?降低犯罪的最佳方法是延长监狱星期吗?刑满释放人员再犯罪率很高，为什么，如何解决?你认为罪犯应该送到监狱还是应该做一些社区工作或学习一些技能?

雅思话题作文范文：看电视对孩子的影响

Is watching TV harmful or beneficial for children’s creativity?

TV is an essential part of leisure activities in most families. However, some parents decide not to have a TV set in their homes, in order that their children will devote enough time to invention and creation.

Do you agree or disagree with this attitude?

The invention of television, one of the products of modern civilization, has made an enormous change in the lifestyle of human beings. TV has been playing more and more important role in most families after work. Yet, as to whether it is a blessing or a curse, parents often hold widely different opinions and take totally different attitudes.

There is suspicion in some parents’ minds that TV might retard their children’s creative ability or restrain kids’ imagination because TV viewers tend to receive information in a passive way instead of discovering things by themselves. Although people working in the TV industry have made lots of efforts to produce various programs, the outcome is usually unsatisfactory: either the program is too profound to be understood or the topic is not interesting enough to attract TV audiences. Thus, watching TV is hardly a good way to inspire children’s creativity. In many cases, it can draw attention away from their studies and spoil their school education.(From:www.cnielts.com)

Despite the negativ...

（1）寻求资源的最佳配置与结果 (optimal resource allocations)
（2）某种措施或现象的利弊 (pros and cons)
（3）针对某一问题找原因、提建议 (causes and solutions)

我们在练习雅思大作文的写作时，不妨试着归纳这样的原型, 以不变应万变。此外，相信大家都听很多人说过，不要背模板，而是要发展自己的模板。我基本上同意这样的说法，与其背模板，我觉得不如想想如何建立一套自己的答题逻辑。有些常规套路其实很好用，比如很多事情都是多维度的（multifaceted），所以题目列出的两方面并非绝对矛盾（not mutually exclusive）。又如：世界上没有统一的标准（unitary standards），适用于西方的，未必同样适用东方，反之同理（vice versa）。另外与时俱进（keep up with the times）也是很好用的句子，可用来比较批驳僵化的观点。

根本上，我觉得大作文不外乎要求我们从经济、政治、文化、环境等方面考虑现代社会（modern society）的现象与问题（无论是现象本身，还是其effects）。所以当下重要的主题（themes）与趋势(trends)，对破题也很有帮助，比如全球化（globalization）, 气候变化（climate change）, 金融危机（financial turmoil)，etc. 这方面，《时代周刊》（Time Magazine）和《纽约时报》（NY Times）网站很有用，我在里面找到了很多cutting edge的文章，从教育、经济到环保都很齐全，更重要是基本上都是免费的。

最后，作文的不二法门最后只能是practice, 外加不断的琢磨，看看别人怎么用词造句，为何这么用，然后建立一套自己的repertoire，这当然也是个长期的过程，仅此和大家共勉。

首先，一个段落必须有一个中心即主题思想，该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须 紧扣这个主题(stick or hold to the topic)，这就是段落的统一性(unity)。其次，一个段落必须有若 干推展句，使主题思想得到充分展开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，这就是完整性(completeness or adequateness)。再者，一个段落不是杂乱无章的，而是有机的组合，句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻 辑，从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅(smooth)，这就是连贯性(coherence)。下面我们就对 这三个标准分别加以说明。

1. 统一性
一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看 下例：
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主题句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences，一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，这 一段是讲的是Joe and I ，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。考生在四级统考的作文卷上常常因为造出 irrelevant sentences（不相关语句）而丢分，值得引起注意。再看一个例子：
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-fee...

英国陷入了二次探底，关于衰退的定义，连续两个季度出现收缩，有些武断，也没有参考意义。

请看相关英文报道：

The UK is in a double-dip recession and the definition of recession – two consecutive quarters of contraction – is arbitrary and unhelpful.

分析：

在上述报道中，"double-dip recession"就是“二次探底”的意思。 温家宝总理曾经在答记者会上说过，经济发展要预防二次探底，因为相比第一次经济衰退来说，二次探底的风险更大，对经济复苏造成的影响也就更大。

各种“衰退”的英语表达：

1.衰退：recession

Economists fear a similar wave of protectionism today could plunge the world back into recession.

经济学家担心类似的保护主义会使得世界经济再次衰退。

2.不景气：downturn

Heavy labor taxes are one reason why Europe entered the downturn with far higher unemployment than America.

高额的劳动力税是欧洲以比美国更高的失业率步入衰退的原因之一。

3.暴跌：meltdown

If 2008 was the year of the banking meltdown, then 2009 was the year of the stimulus packages.

如果2008年是银行彻底垮台的一年，那么2009年就是一篮子刺激政策的一年。

4.下挫：slump

This would return the economy into a slump.

这将使美国经济再次陷入衰退。

5.下滑：decline

Many Greeks believe they are caught up in a cycle of decline.

很多希腊人相信他们正处于一轮下降周期之中。

英语雅思写作拿高分其实也并不难，青岛新东方学校里有很多考雅思的同学作文都拿了高分，甚至还有满分的。失分多关键主要还是构思方面不清晰，很多学员都想在雅思考试中拿到写作的高分，以下是青岛新东方雅思中心专家总结各位高分学员的经验，和大家分享一些提高雅思写作的方法：

第一， 每周一记

首先需要有大量足够的词汇来表达自己的想法和观点，每周一记是很有必要的，既然每天都有不一样繁多的任务需要处理需要解决，那就腾出个时间来每周一记吧，每周写一篇英文周记吧!用自己所学过的或者是刚学到的词汇套到作文里，展开话题，发挥自己的想象力来试着写一篇感慨的文章，自己给自己规定写作要求，用所学过的的时态、语态以及不一样的语法知识进行描述吧。

第二，每天一练

每天都能坚持写作练习，慢慢地养成良好的学习习惯也是很有必要的，不论有多少好主意、好观点在你的脑海里，你所拥有的或者是你的经验有多么的丰富，如果你不能坚持把它用笔记录下来那还是没有任何意义的，虽然我们将来不一定都能成为作家，但优秀的写作能力在将来的学习和工作中也显得尤为重要。还是很有必要加强练习以及可以记录自己很多难忘的美好的场景。每天来个不一样的Topic去激发自己想写文章的欲望吧!

第三， 每天一读

每天都尽量给自己抽点空去阅读一些好文章，比如自己感兴趣的英文小说、英文报刊、杂志等来扩充自己的词汇量和丰富自己的写作内容，从别人的文章中叶是很能受益匪浅的，遇有好词好句就多动动手摘抄下来然后灵活运用到自己今后的写作中。

第四，每天提速一点点

把握每次写作的时间，每天都能有所提高，锻炼写作速度以及写作技巧，语法错误尽量避免，词汇用得恰当，拼写错误不会出现最好，段落大意要清晰，可以吸引读者眼球，激发读者阅读你写的文章的兴趣。

当然，提高写作能力不是一天两天就能突飞猛进得到提高和进步的，需要大量词汇的积累和大量的练习，加快写作速度和技巧，持之以恒地练习写作，相信你一定能取得满意的成绩!!