雅思写作高分模板

方法1：压缩审题的时间

如果说独立写作是闭卷考试，那么你花上3～5分钟的时间去审题，去构思，是很必要的。但是，实际情况是，独立写作是开卷考试，首先题库公开，它的题型和题材都不会超出题库的范围，你总会在题库中找到类似的题目，加之机经的强大力量，使得雅思独立写作真的成了开卷考试。既然是开卷考试，大家就应该把审题的工作放到考试之前做，争取在1分钟之内完成，不要浪费时间，把时间用来打字，而不是思考上面。那些思维风暴、切题思路之类的，应该是事先已经准备过，训练过的。如果考到了你从来没接触过的题，只能说明你没有准备到位，如果你的审题时间超过了2 分钟，那么你的准备也没有到位，这就是开卷考试的备考思维，满分不是临场发挥出来的，而是准备出来的。

方法2：“栽赃法”

如果不能保证文章的质量，可以从数量入手，记住我在课上讲过的托福写作黄金法则“the longer， the better”!新东方的学员中曾经有位写作30分的获得者，独立写作30分钟写了600字，拿了满分。当然他肯定有一些不足和错误，可是仍然不影响满分。可见如果不能把文章写得很漂亮，不能写出亮点，那就多写点吧，字数多也是亮点。只要大家按照我上课讲授过的方法来扩充论据，写出“长篇大论”是很容易的事。

方法3：提炼自己的模板

假设你的文章字数是 400字，那么你大概要写40～50个句子。把这40～50个句子，排成编号，从第1个到第40个，也就是从文章的第一句话到最后一句话，你都知道要写什么，并且知道怎么写，甚至每个句子你都掌握了2～3个漂亮的句式，这样你还担心自己拿不到高分吗?再假设，这40～50个句子，你有50%都已经是固定句式了，也就是成了自己的写作套路，那么你还愁文章写不完么?比如说，我总是喜欢在文章最后一句话 说 ：In a word， it is rather superficial to simply say that……+观点，给个真题例子：In a word， it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.用一句话说，简单地认为父母是最好的老师是相当肤浅的。大家想一想，任何事情simply say都可以说是相当肤浅的。因此这句话就是一句比较万能的结束语。这句话怎么来的呢?这是官方题库里的第2篇，是我和大家在课上积累来的。只要大家一起努力，我们一定会成功提炼出自己的高分模版。

方法4：压缩题库

题库中一共有185个题目，如果说每个题目都准备一篇范文是相当不可取的，效率太低，完全没有必要，压缩题库的方法主要有2种：A.将题库分类。每个分类写1～2篇就可以解决这个类的题目。 B.文章之间的互相转化：

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不妨通过这样的例子来说明问题：

TOPIC1：你最崇拜的人是谁?why

ANSWER：毛泽东。原因：A.B.C

雅思话题作文范文：环境保护

Environmental hazards are often too great for particular countries or individuals to tackle. We have arrived at a point in time where the only way to lessen environmental problems is at an international level.

Environmental problems have reached such proportions that people feel international organizations must be set up to intervene in world affairs to resolve these problems. Whether this will resolve the problem is very unlikely as international organizations are just an extension of human behavior. That is, if human conflicts cannot be resolved at home, then they are unlikely to be resolved at the international level. Nevertheless, international organizations do attract attention to the growing problem of aims of the international community to resolve the issue of environmental pollution and support their cause, I do not believe it is the best or only way to protect the environment; in fact, it is only a small part of what is needed in a global initiative.

All world problems, whether it is environmental pollution, war, energy insufficiency, or famine, arise from the abusive behavior of all individuals. Therefore, the solution to all these problems is the need for a collective consciousness. What is meant by this is that each individual must be aware of the impact he or she has on the world and their unique part to play in this world. After all, if one is happy with his life, he will surely not endea...

在写作中能够得心应手的正确使用各种英文表达，对于许多考生来说都是一件心向往之却身久不能至的憾事。大多数考生对于写作词汇和句法的积累，依旧停留在机械的背单词背句子的低层次上，长此以往英文的表达能力不仅不会有长足的进步，甚至还会由于存在大量词不达意、文不对题的表达而导致英文水平退步。词汇学习关键要结合“四种短语”搭配法在语境中系统掌握和运用。

一、动词+名词

动词加名词结构在英文议论文中使用的频率最多。它既可以用在主动语态的句子中，也可以用在被动语态的句子中。但要注意：这里使用的动词是及物动词。下面给大家列举几个例子。

例一：spoil one’s children溺爱孩子

剑四4 These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this, but in more material ways.

例二：Encounter situations and experiences遭遇不同的处境和经历

剑五4 Instead, the traits we inherit from our parents and the experiences and situations we encounter in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.

例三：shape one’s personality影响人的性格

剑五4 It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates how that personality develops.

例四：raise the awareness提高意识

剑五B I think, therefore, that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public.

例五：take action采取行动

剑五B Children can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action.

例六：produce waste制造垃圾

剑五B I think it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.

二、动词+介词

动词加名词是英文...

很多同学写作学到最后还是不清楚到底怎么样进一步提高写作，提高写作似乎举步艰难。其实，是他们把问题想的太复杂了，提高写作的确有难度，但是方法就这么些:

1.结构。

作文结构是最简单的，10分钟搞定，根本不需要想太多。经常被学生问道:这样写可不可以，那样写可不可以。其实雅思对结构的要求中规中矩，即大作文一般都是写4-5段，第一段表达观点，正文段从不同角度来论证，最后一段重申观点。

2.内容。

更多的同学是在内容上遇到了障碍。很多人在思索有没有什么高深的论点，有没有什么新颖的观点可以使自己更加突出。其实，雅思考试就那么点时间，要在短时间内构思出来那么些东西对大多数同学来说是不太现实的。所以雅思写作的内容主要体现在两个字:充实！specifically,就是正文段每个分论点后面都要有一定的展开，至少能够构思2-3个分论点来证明自己的观点。

3.语言。

这是很多同学盲目自信的地方或者自卑的地方。用最简单的语言来说:5-6分就是看语言的正确性；7-8分就是看语言的多样性（当然是建立在正确性的基础之上的）。其实提高写作之所以难就是难在短时间内语言上很难有一个质的飞跃！

好了，这篇文章是帮助那些对写作还比较迷茫的同学。越是觉得写作差越是要思路清晰，不要老是去找“偏方”，哪有那么神奇。还是踏踏实实地从这三方面提高更为现实。

七月的雅思写作将是波澜不惊的，由于基本上雅思在八月将会推出机考的试行，最近六月和七月个人感觉有点“真空期”的味道，主要是那帮鬼子在做新题目的测试更新，无暇在此时机再做许多创新了，所以最近的题目都是来自于06和07年的老题，基本不更新，所以恭喜最近一个月考试的雅友，你们真幸运！整体难度不大，也不会有很多怪题。甚至我的学生告诉我最近口语考官的态度也很好，好得让人觉得不自然，不知他们再搞什么鬼，总之努把力都能过。

小作文还是没什么多讲的，基本上没上过我课的人三言两语也是讲不清的，建议大家一定要来上我的强化班，基本能确保6分-6.5分，曲线和柱状图将会在7月大量测试，本来它们就是两种主打的题型，大家特别要注意趋势描述的质量(用词变化)和句型的变化，否则6份很难获得，其次是总分和宏观分类，这是通往7分的关键。流程图在7月初的可能性没有，此后要稍加留意。

大作文锁定3和5号球，分别是抽象题和科技的题目。由于很多网友可能没有上过我的课，一时看不懂我讲的“球”的概念，那你可以的话来参加我的点题班就是可以的，一周的课程直接针对当月的考试，基本也能听懂并贯通我的概念。不过由于现在雅思写作大量搞“组合球”的概念，因此考生千万不可掉以轻心，在审题当中可以根据实际情况对文章的大主题加以判断，根据你的判断去写作，不必拘泥于先前的定位，再说2和3号秋本身就是密不可分的，因此当月的准备变成了2/3/5号球，以保万一。

准备重点题目：

1)More and more people use the mobile phone or computer to communicate, and no longer write letters to each other. Some people think the skills of letter writing will soon disappear completely. Do you agree or disagree? How important do you think letter-writing is?

2)It is now possible to perform everyday tasks as banking, shopping and business transactions without meeting people face-to-face. What are the effects it may bring on the individual and the society as a whole?

3)Nowadays, a lot of advertisements are aimed at children. Some people think there are lots of negative effects for children and should ban the advertisements. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

4)Some think the government should be responsible for ensuring the people of the country that have healthy lifest...

文章修改过程中用到了很多课上所讲的句式和表达，希望大家能够熟练使用和掌握！

Topic:

Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judge right and wrong and how to behave well, some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

原文：

As a result of the responsibility of a teacher,One side argument is they orght to teach the students how to distinguish right and wrong and how to be a human being well.the other side view is they should solely teach students about academic konwledges.In the following paraguaphs I will discuss each argument.

First,teaching konwledges is a initial responsibility of a teacher.they should make every student learned various konwledges and the methods of how to study. When the students are studying in the primary school,they do not know anything about different subjuct. A good teacher should have the ability of how to guide the students to study and improve the attention of students increasingly paying to the various subject.

On the other hand, apart from academic knowledges the students also need other skills. It is necessary that the teacher taught the students how to realise everything of the society, such as teammork,uderstanding each other, helping someone when he or she needs, in addition,the teacher also need teach the students how to solre the problems they meet, and how to face the difficult time a...

There is no doubt that helping students find a job is one of the primary functions of university education, but universities do exist for other purposes such as improving students’ analytical skills and raising students’ moral standards.

A university education can be seen as a process of improving students’ analytical thinking. The variety of courses offered at university inspires students in various ways, therefore improving their analytical ability. For example, science courses such as math and biology help students develop a rational way of thinking whereas arts courses such as literature 123ve to let students ponder over issues from a logical, multi- dimensional perspective; and courses in social sciences force students to recognize the ideas that have been traditionally assumed to be acceptable and unproblematic. With the development of these types of analytical thinking, graduates can face future challenges with more confidence and enthusiasm.

Also, university education is expected to improve students’ moral standards. This is rooted in universities’ belief that students’ awar123ss of responsibility towards their community and their country is of high importance. In this ever-deg123rating society and civilization, students are encouraged actively participate in improving the local community. A university that provides care and facilities for physically disadvantaged students may i...