高考英语满分作文范文

　　高考英语满分作文范文：写给肺癌患者的慰问信

　　据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。

　　假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：

　　自我介绍

　　得知的情况

　　表示鼓励

　　打算为她做什么

　　祝她早日康复

　　注意：

　　1. 信的格式已为你写好

　　2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。

　　3. 词数100左右。

　　4. 请在答题卡上作答。

　　Dear Amy,

　　I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　[名师点评]

　　本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如Im sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。

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　　好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠

　　好句1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.

　　我很遗憾...

　　Nowadays more and more people have realized smoking can do harm to people'shealth. However, some people still enjoy smoking. Why? Because some of them think it is a kind of fashion, some think it is of great fun and others, think that smoking can refresh themselves.

　　In fact, smoking is a bad habit. It can cause a lot of diseases. Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money. Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.

　　Smoking is harmful and it is not only bad for smokers themselves, but also bad for non-smokers.

　　Therefore, I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them.

　　据估计，在中国吸烟者约占总人口的一半，而且烟民的年龄越来越年轻，甚至一些中学生也在抽烟。

　　如今越来越多的人们已经认识到吸烟有害人体健康，但他们仍然乐此不疲。为什么?一些人认为抽烟是一种时髦，另外一些人认为抽烟很有趣，还有一些人认为吸烟可以提神。

　　事实上，吸烟是一种不好的习惯，它能导致很多疾病。同时，吸烟很浪费金钱。除此而外，粗心的烟民还可能引起火灾。

　　吸烟对人们的身体百害而无一利。它不仅有害吸烟者本人，而且对不吸烟者也会造成损害。

　　因此，我希望吸烟者为自己和身边的人们而戒烟。

　　It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking.Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students.

　　As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings. More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. But they are never bored with it. Some people think it is ...