作文例句

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　　2020考研英语：作文修饰手法

　　好的写作，首先而且至关重要的一点就是简洁。繁冗的写作堆砌了许多无用的词藻，反而减弱表述的清晰度。当然，也不能仅仅因为简短就认为短句一定优于长句。只要一个单词确实能起到一定的作用，它就应该留在句中。一般来说，只有在进行强调或修饰、美化句子时，才能使用重复的单词、语音和短语。修改文章，就是要删繁就简。

　　例一

　　【原】It makes me feel painful to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a

　　week.

　　【改】It pains me to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week.

　　例二

　　【原】It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and everyone of the Chinese people

　　【改】Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all Chinese.

　　例三

　　【原】This book will help you master the basic elements of good writing

　　【改】This book will help you master the basics of good writing

　　例四

　　【原】The search of the forest that they conducted was entirely complete

　　【改】The search of the forest was complete

　　例五

　　【原】Whenever anyone telephoned her to ask her for help with their homework she always obliged right away.

　　【改】She immediately obliged anyone who telephoned for help with homework.

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　　《阿甘正传》是由罗伯特·泽米吉斯执导的电影，由汤姆·汉克斯、罗宾·怀特等人主演，于1994年7月6日在美国上映。电影改编自美国作家温斯顿·格卢姆于1986年出版的同名小说，描绘了先天智障的小镇男孩福瑞斯特·甘自强不息，最终“傻人有傻福”地得到上天眷顾，在多个领域创造奇迹的励志故事。

　　【影片例句】

　　1.Life was like a box of chocolates, you never know what you're going to get.

　　生命就像一盒巧克力，结果往往出人意料。

　　2.Stupid is as stupid does.

　　蠢人做蠢事，也可理解为傻人有傻福。

　　3.Miracles happen every day.

　　奇迹每天都在发生。

　　4.it made me look like a duck in water.

　　它让我如鱼得水。

　　5.I don't know if we each have a destiny, or if we're all just floating around accidental-like on a breeze.

　　我不懂我们是否有着各自的命运，还是只是到处随风飘荡。

　　6.Death is just a part of life, something we're all destined to do.

　　死亡是生命的一部分，是我们注定要做的一件事。

　　7.You have got to put the past behind you before you can move on.

　　放下包袱，继续前进。

　　8.Shit happens!

　　不好的事情发生了。

　　9.It was like just before the sun goes to bed down on the bayou. There was a million sparkles on the river.

　　就像太阳在落山前映射在河口上，有无数的亮点在闪闪发光。