Topic
You recently met a manager from a new company that opened in your town. After the meeting, he wrote to you, offering you a job in this new company. However, you want to stay in your present job. Write a letter to the manager, and include: thanks him for the offer, explain why you want to stay in the present job, recommend a friend to take the job in the new company.
Rewritten Sample writing:
My sincere apologies for the delay in my response, as I wished to consider your offer in detail.
First, I wish to express my gratitude for your generous offer, which was important to me, nevertheless after consideration I believe that I would prefer to stay in my current position.
As a structural engineer, the design of economical residential buildings to accommodate general people was a dream of my childhood, and presently I am very fortunate that I am able to fulfill my dreams. As a result, it would be my intention to remain with my present work.
At the same time, and this may be of interest to you, I would like to recommend a friend, Bob Gillett, who was a colleague of mine, to apply for the position that you offered me. He is specialized in environmental engineering and has ten years’ working experience. I believe he would be the perfect candidate for your company. I have also spoken with him in brief and you can contact him directly on 0432783157. I am sure he would be pleased to hear from ...
旧题>Some people think that sending criminals to prison is an effective way to deal with them. Others think that education and training are better solutions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
新题>"Prisons are useless for crime problems and education is a better solution. " Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
谢振礼老师雅思范文：监狱教育
IELTS Writing Task 2
Essay Topic: Criminals and Prisons
As seen in China, 2012-5-12
谢振礼老师点评》
此试题把作者搞糊涂了，顿时无从下手作答。按个人的知识或经验，重犯理当坐大牢，藉以隔离社会而不至于再伤害无辜。监狱里都有职业训练--木工，水泥工，机器工，烹饪，修车，也有成人教育课程。总希望犯人出狱后改邪归正，从此变成良民。搞不懂的是为什么真题问: 施于罪犯教育训练胜过送这些坏蛋去坐牢更是良策。你同意还是不同意。疑点是：难道教育的场所是和监狱分开?搞不懂!
英文写作高手答题的立场清清楚楚，论证头头是道，很值得烤鸭参考。大意是说教育囚犯比起监禁囚犯更为划算，而却又能让坏人有改过自新的机会。就这样写，只要英文有慎老师一半的水平，保证写作高分。
谢老师的范文有点七上八下。论点包挂，作奸犯科者难逃服刑，同时也在监狱里接受职业管训，虽然效果仅仅是聊胜于无。总之，大牢是非去不可，如此至少让社会安宁一点。不要高估狱中教育的正面效果，因为事实证明出狱后的恶人往往变本加厉，危害社会。君不见监狱的大门是旋转门，犯人进进出出，这也说明教育的用意虽然无懈可击，却又看不到期待的教育效果。所以谢老师的立场：教育不能代替监狱。
Example Writing
By Jeenn Lee Hsieh
First thing first, accept that sending criminals to prison is an effective, if not the only way, to protect society. Stop thinking in terms of education as "punishment" for a moment and instead think about safeguarding innocent people from incorrigible violent sex offenders, trigger-happy drug dealers, and cold-blooded murderers. Educat...
动物
5.27 Some people think that the use of animal for experimentation is cruel; others think it is good for the development of science. Discuss the two sides and give you opinion.
环境资源交通
6.17 The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent you agree with or disagree?
传统与发展变化
10.21Counties is much more interesting and develop more quickly when their population include a mixture of dofferent nationalities and cultures.To what extend do you agree or disagree?
11.14 Exposure of international media has a significant impact on cultures.what has the impact been? Does the advantange outweigh the disadvantages?
句子就是财富,句子就是一切,这些句子是从近百篇雅思优秀作文中摘录下来并经反复推敲提炼而成的.对于复习时间短,基础较薄弱的朋友能够在短期内熟悉且背诵这些经典句子无疑是准备雅思考试的捷径。
According to a recent survey ,four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.
依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟相关的疾病.
The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.
最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感.
No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.
没有一项发明象互联网同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评.
People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.
人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实.
Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.
许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康.
Nowadays ,many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately ,for most young people ,it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.
当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈.然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历.
In view of the seriousness of this problem ,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.
考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施.
Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.
应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响.
An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert posi...
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我希望6月28日是我最最最后一次考这该死的ietls。为了它，我已经身无分文。为了它，我受到很多前所未有的羞辱和压力……从来没想到出国会是这么艰辛的事情，可怕的是，这是一种不平等的“艰辛”。
以我的个人体会，看国内老师出的写作书跟真正的英国老师看中的写作风格又百分之百是两种境界。这一点，我相信大家只要认真看一下目前国内出版的唯一正宗的ietls模拟试题《剑桥ietls考试题集》上的范文就会深有体会了，当中有哪一篇是按模版句型的路数来写的呢？我记得中间有一篇甚至只分了两段！
总之，我想大家应该多看真正英语国家的人写的文章（当然一定要多看议论文哟~），最后，你会发现自己写作会变得随意很多，你可能会把句子拆得很碎，用了很多插入、或者从句前置，而且突然发现自己的思路也不太拘于从前大家习惯的那些一二三点的套路了！！而谈到我自己的经历嘛，因为长期对写作复习一直处在阅读状态（读了好几本书，还有那些网站上的素材）以至于直到最后一周才开始真正提笔！但事实上的效果对于我来说真是“突然的惊喜”！！
另外就是口语了。虽然我没有跟外国人聊过一句，也没有刻意背过一个topic，但在口试那天，个人感觉part3发挥得超好，跟考官谈竞争的利弊、谈年轻人的理想……因为能真实而充分地表达想法，交流就会容易显出自己的思想特色，我相信这样一定会给考官一个好印象。事后想一想，我感觉这还是跟平时看了大量的英语文章有关，而且在文章的选择上当然还是紧扣ielts的考题范围哟~~：）
好了，废话不多说了，下面是我在复习ielts时自己找到一些非常有用的网站。首先，我保证它们都能打得开！第二，我能想像得到，下面的这些东东对大家一定是大大的惊喜。因为当初它们就帮我了很大的忙呢！：）第三，我不得不提醒大家，你们会在这些网站找到很多对作文和口语极有帮助的素材，而且当然是全英文的，特别是有一些现成的英文论文，但是，我还是要建议大家一定不要照抄，之所以推荐英文的网站，就是希望大家能好好读读真正的英语文章。以这种方式打基础，不出三个月，你自己就会创造一个更大的惊喜！！：）
http://www.factmonster.com/index.html
一个包含people，science，english study等等很多资料的好网站，会找到很多对写作和口语有用的素材！！！：）
http://www.ira.org/index.html
在这个名为international reading association的网站，你会找到很多对写作非常有帮助的专题文章，可以丰富你的相关词汇量，同时也能提到你的观点表达能力！！！：）
我们的努力没有您的支持我们无法做的更好！感谢您拜读《关于写作——很有用的英文网站！！》一文.本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《关于写作——很有用的英文网站！！》。
http://www.getfreeessays.com/home.php
这个网站会叫你大吃一惊！有上万篇各种题材的“作文”在那里免费等你down呢！不过，一定要先注册才能看到文章的全部内容~而注册的条件之一是你要奉献自己的...
1.the table shows the changes in the number of……over the period from……to……
该表格描述了在……年之……年间……数量的变化。
2.the bar chart illustrates that……
该柱状图展示了……
3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding……
该图为我们提供了有关……有趣数据。
4.the diagram shows (that)……
该图向我们展示了……
5.the pie graph depicts (that)……
该圆形图揭示了……
6.this is a curve graph which describes the trend of……
这个曲线图描述了……的趋势。
7.the figures/statistics show (that)……
数据(字)表明……
8.the tree diagram reveals how……
该树型图向我们揭示了如何……
9.the data/statistics show (that)……
该数据(字)可以这样理解……
10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that……
这些数据资料令我们得出结论……
雅思写作高分的取得并不是一件容易的事，大家需要掌握一定的写作技巧，词汇的应用就是最基础的。下面为大家搜集整理了两个关于词汇应用方面的雅思写作高分技巧，供大家在写作备考的过程中进行适当的参考和借鉴。
词汇语序不准确是导致大家不能拿到雅思写作高分的重要因素。
因为中文和英文的叙述方式的不同，词汇的搭配顺序也有很大的区别，所以在雅思写作中，常常会造成一些中式英语的文章，也就是说会写一些完全按照中文语序逐字翻译的错句。这样的语言表达会给考官阅读带来困难，会对句意理解出现分歧，如此一来，当然会大大影响作文的得分。
例如：“竞争合作意识”应当被翻成“the sense of competition and cooperation”。
许多考生在情急之下，往往会翻成“competition and cooperation sense”
这样的表达一旦出现比例较高，便会给考官造成语言不地道的感觉，也就难以取得雅思写作高分。想要掌握正确的词汇的表达顺序这个雅思写作技巧，大家需要在备考雅思写作的过程中接触更多的英语读物，形成英语写作的思维。
书写上存在简写或缩写也是倒是大家不能拿到雅思写作高分的因素。
很多考生在备考雅思写作考试的时候，不能区分口语用词和书面用词的区别，以至于把一些不用在书面表达的方式用在了写作上。口语与写作的最大区别便是口语较随意，而写作比较严谨。为了凸显作文的书面感，建议考生应尽量避免明显的或者大量的简写和缩写形式。一来可以让卷面看起来更加清爽，二来也可以给考官留下认真严谨的好印象。
典型的易写缩写的表达有：
It’s 应该写成it is
What’s more应该写成what is more,
Can’t应该写成cannot
以上就是这两个雅思写作高分技巧的全部内容，包括了词汇的语序和词汇的简写和缩写两个部分。大家在自己的雅思写作备考的过程中，一定要注意这两个方面，只要不按照自己思考中文的思维方式来写作，就能大大减少这些可能性了。
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