WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years’ time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist travel, rather than to limit the use of cars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
As known by (1) all the individuals (2), pollution is one of the severest (3) threats human beings faced , (4) which result (5) in myriad focuses and worries. However, some people’s idea on flight limitation cannot be accepted by myself (6). Reasons are outlined below.(7)
1.习惯上用介词to。
2.另外，这句话属于废话，纯属凑字数，完全没有意义，直接删掉。
3.severe的比较级/最高级通常是在前面加more/ most，加-r和-st不常用。
4.face这个词可以用主动语态，也可以用被动语态。如果是主动，这里应该是human beings face，如果是被动，这里应该是faced human beings。
5.前面的主语是单数，应该也应该是单数。改为results。
6.这里为何要强调myself? 改为me就可以了。但是，改完以后这个句子还是显得头重脚轻，这不是正常的英语句子。
7.这句话过于简短，突然冒出一个短句让人难以接受。
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